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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-06-02 01:59 AM

Silence’s Echo

a silent echo
    is there
       such a thing
         does a voice
             still
               take wing
                 and if
                   there
                      is no reply
                         will it disappear
                            within
                          the sky
                       is there
                     no response
                    to sound
                   without
              a bounce
        to a
          hearts wall
              found
                   to be
                a reflection
          of repeat
      vibration to make
it complete

"The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche'

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

1 posted 2002-06-02 04:14 AM

Wonderful write here, love the way it flows... pausing at every line, but still flowing. Great imagery and question as well

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-06-02 10:26 AM

Excellent!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-06-02 10:37 AM

1slick_lady
This wiggled right through my mind, enjoyed.

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

4 posted 2002-06-02 12:28 PM

Ahh, Helen, what a very thought provoking write and excellent read...very well done indeed...very gentle smile

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2002-06-03 07:59 AM

mmm I like the moves here
and still like the hat too

enjoyed it slick 1

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2002-06-03 09:55 AM

Looks like a good heartbeat to me.
Well done.
Yes.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2002-06-03 10:02 AM

liked it

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2002-06-03 11:23 AM

Hi, I'm glad I stopped to read this little gem. Perfect.
Sandra

(for no apparent reason it made me think among other things of this joke"If a man is alone in the woods and no one hears him, is he still WRONG?"
LOL

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-06-03 08:13 PM

(sigh) I believe there is such a thing, sweet friend, I believe when a heart beats for someone and it is not savored, it can be such that expression that vanishes! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, your words always strum the heartstrings, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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