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Red Curtain
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Red Curtain |
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deadeyes Junior Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 33 |
As I sit in front of the red curtain I ponder what enigmas behold behind it. Could it be a creation made by my imagination or a curtain that screams eerie illusions. The first time i opened this red curtain I spoke to a dwarf with no name and told me that the end was near and that some tangent universe was conquering mankind. The second time I opened this red curtain I talked to my disfigured reflection, my identity and urged me to change my ways that some day my life would backfire. The third time I opened this red curtain I urged myself to stop seeing these things I felt confused and raged I wanted it to go away. Suddenly, I stared at the red curtain and oddly opened by itself. What caught my surprise was that nothing appeared but pitch blackness. As my eyes faded to this red curtain everything seemed out of focus I couldn't realize what was it behind the curtain And suddenly I inferred the scenery. A bright smile came into my face. "Silencio..no hay banda..no hay orquesta. We hear a band yet we don't see a band". It is all a recording. Silencio. It is all an illusion". |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is interesting...I found "red" to be very effective, being of "witchy" leaning..Red being the color of desire, I enjoyed the psychological implication through this slant of thought. Will be reading more of you (I hope!) |
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deadeyes Junior Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 33 |
Sure serenity..I will..thing is because i'm 17 I usually write in Teen Poetry..but i'll write more of my stuff now that you're interested in here. "Silencio..no hay banda..no hay orquesta. We hear a band yet we don't see a band". It is all a recording. Silencio. It is all an illusion". |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
wow i really like this poem. Its so different than anything ive ever read (in a very very good way) please post more often in here! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Way cool write! Enjoyed much! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
An interesting look within. Thank you for sharing. INclan |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Wow, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (sigh) It too amazes me how these opticail illusions can always have us see so much at so many angles, sweet friend, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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