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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-05-05 06:21 AM


Veil

I looked
into
her eyes
of sadness
and wondered
what was
behind
her heart



© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Muys
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1 posted 2002-05-05 08:29 AM


          
           ~~~*Dearest Lady*~~~

            a joke        
              Perhaps a stone?
Love kiss Muys

Larry C
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2 posted 2002-05-05 02:50 PM


Helen,
I wonder too. Nice.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2002-05-05 03:09 PM



Hope?

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-05-05 04:53 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Helen, this is soooooo powerfully bittersweet, sweet friend, I hope she will be willing to slide the veil from over her heart and share the tears to you so she can be helped! (sigh) This is so very sad but compassionate, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful eart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2002-05-05 04:55 PM


short, sweet and ...enjoyed

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JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-05-05 05:20 PM


Like this...James
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2002-05-05 05:35 PM


Helen, I think Karilea hit it on the head with 'hope'.
Probably 'hope', 'longing' and 'fear'....
Wonderful words written here.
~Hugs~

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just out of reach
8 posted 2002-05-05 05:58 PM


Perfect - love this. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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