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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-05-01 02:21 PM

We look at it sometimes

like this
true love

identical twins
equal   devotion

spiral blue
yellow daffodil

unmistakable
color s
washing over

an erotic hush
spilling from
poetic  lips
revealing

a redemption
of heaven

comfort, your arms,
a dream I hold
reality  desire
safe

caress of feeling,
tip of finger
naked gliding

gentle butterfly
floating
soft
firefly
of October skies

Autumn   beauty
winter   coldness

silence  even

blues and rhythm

playing

"Misty for Me"

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (05-01-2002 05:10 PM).]

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-05-01 02:26 PM

You're so good at this.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2002-05-01 02:47 PM

Lauren,
An invitation I would hate to refuse! Great write.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-05-01 03:06 PM

"an erotic hush
spilling from
poetic lips
revealing

a redemption
of heaven

comfort, your arms
a dream I hold
reality desire
safe"

(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is soooooo lovely and sensual, sweet friend, may the butterfly of your dreams always flutter happily in your heart and conduct the blues and rhythm and jazz of joy to you! (kiss on cheek) YAY!!! CONGRATULATIONS ON 3000, SWEET FRIEND, THIS IS EXCELLENT, WE ALL LOVE YOU SO MUCH! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-05-01 03:13 PM

Greeneyes
It played Misty for me. Beautiful write, enjoyed.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2002-05-01 03:18 PM

I ADORE THIS. Truly, I love music themed poetry...talk about twins!!! smiles across miles...I just may go download that, as I tuck this into library!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2002-05-01 03:46 PM

Greeneyes - I'll play Misty for you anytime. Used to with the band a while ago, beautiful song... And beautiful poem...

BC

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2002-05-01 04:12 PM

tch...forgot to click! sigh...

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2002-05-01 05:09 PM

blues from the Green one. . . I like it. . .

wonderful. . . just wonderful. . .

---------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2002-05-01 08:37 PM

Remember the song well....and the movie...

Excellent poem...love the feel of this..

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2002-05-01 08:43 PM

Gosh Lauren...this is SO dang good!!
LOVE it!!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

11 posted 2002-05-01 11:08 PM

excellent write, Lauren
-Dave

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

12 posted 2002-05-02 01:21 AM

Bump!

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

13 posted 2002-05-02 01:32 AM

Sounds like the perfect love song
if you can keep up with the beat!!

You got rhythm girl!!!

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

14 posted 2002-05-02 02:18 AM

Made me misty ....
winter's coldness has me feeling this embrace, and its un-escapable silence even.
It left me in a hush.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

15 posted 2002-05-02 10:40 AM

bsquirrel~

I am? thank you for saying that, it is an added smile to my day...

~~

Larry~

woohooooooo.....from my child hood....

thanks my friend....

~~

Noah~

Jazz of Joy....I love that....sweet friend....thank you

~~

SY~

you could hear it too huh?? thanks SY...

~~

Karen~

its a "moody blues" for me...

thank you for peeking in...I appreciate you....thanks for the double click

~~

Bill~

I'll take you up on that....save a song for me...

~~

Sven~

sometimes it can be a good mood....Thanks

~~

Barry~

tis a great movie, and song....so glad you enjoyed...

~~

Nancy~

so glad you did, thanks for swinging by...HUGSSS

~~

Dave~

thank you much...I keep both you and Tara in my thoughts....I know you are both excited about starting a life together....

hugssss to you both.....

~~

Larry~

Is that kind of a Blues BUMP with Rhythm???? humble thanks....

~~

Lori~

LOL I am too tired these days to "keep" up with anything....I love your replies....HUGSSS

~~

Craig~

embracing this reply, with tender thoughts....

TY.....

~~~~~

Love and Peace to all....
thank you for your time....
Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (05-02-2002 10:41 AM).]

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

16 posted 2002-05-03 09:12 AM

Wow!

[This message has been edited by Interloper (05-03-2002 09:12 AM).]

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

17 posted 2002-05-03 01:14 PM

I like that way that this riffs.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

18 posted 2002-05-03 01:31 PM

beautiful as always...

"comfort, your arms,
a dream I hold
reality desire
safe"

this was my favorite part.

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