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Silence Moon
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Silence Moon |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Silence Moon . . The moon is full Of silence It holds bold man’s secret It fine shines woman’s secret You wonder Why the smile? If you had seen as much… Wouldn’t you? In careful touch, reach out, hold the shine. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms noir, I like your prospective here mystery and suggestion |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Very sensual. Loved it. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Soleil darling girl this is simply outstanding writing, you have written this incredibly well I don’t know how you do it always. Again flawless and perfectly presented. What can I say but this is exceptional. YOU always write brilliantly and today is no exception. Such depth such power in these words, I’m struck dumb in admiration. I knew you were a very good writer, I wasn’t sure just how good till I read this. It is outstanding. Well done darling girl very very well done   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The mystery and allure of the smile of one of our most romantic celestial objects... Your style matches your name well... Soft and sensual.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very well done. Soft and sensual... Much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
The mystery of the moon is a fascinating subject that your muse took and worked into a really fascinating poem. Imagination is more important that knowledge |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . hold the shine. . . I like that. . . well done. . .  --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The moon is full Of silence It holds bold man's secret It fine shines woman's secret ======================= much like a poets pen holds the secrets of the heart.... and your is doing some shining of its own. This one was whispered across the night's sigh .  |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Soleil Noir~ This is full of passion....very nice... Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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