Friendship (A Villanelle, I Hope)

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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-04-27 12:06 PM

A true friend I will always be
Just call my name I'll be there
When the time comes you will see

You can always count on me
I'll show how much I really care
A true friend I will always be

Sitting there underneath a tree
So many things we can share
When the time comes you will see

Friends they mean so much to me
Losing one I just could not bear
A true friend I will always be

I will always listen to thee
And promise not to sit and stare
When the time comes you will see

I will listen to your every plea
Showing you how much I care
A true friend I will always be
When the time comes you will see

By Sue 4-26-02

[This message has been edited by SmartChick (04-27-2002 09:25 PM).]

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2002-04-27 12:50 PM

I think it's a villanelle.

Not sure though, but it's very sweet and nicely done, Sue!

God bless America, my home sweet home.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-04-27 02:09 PM

(smiles) Oh Sue, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I do believe this is a villanelle and it is such a gorgeous one! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are a true angel to us all, we all love you so much, you will always be a friend in me! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2002-04-27 02:41 PM

Nice write, Sue. Beautiful thoughts,and since I don't really understand the form, I can't comment on that part. But I liked it

Sandra

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

4 posted 2002-04-27 04:17 PM

a great Villanelle you wrote here dear friend.

I like your subject and it flows beautifully through the lines.

Titia

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strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

5 posted 2002-04-27 05:38 PM

Very nice villanelle, nice subject. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2002-04-27 09:50 PM

SmartChickie~
What a beautiful subject worked into a beautiful form~
You did this just marvelously~
I really, really like it bunches~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2002-04-27 10:12 PM

Thank you all for your kind comments. This is the first time I have ever wrote a villanelle.

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