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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-04-26 06:36 AM



Splendor

it was
like being lit
on both ends
and pouring
out of
the middle
the moon
erotically melting
and waxing
the earth
with splendor


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-04-26 06:39 AM


beautiful *s

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2 posted 2002-04-26 11:09 PM




(smiles) This is soooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, may the moon always ignite like a candle to you and glow with loves eternal promise always! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fantastic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Honeybee
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3 posted 2002-04-27 09:24 PM



Wow!  So pretty!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2002-04-27 09:45 PM


Sensual write, exceptional. ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2002-04-27 10:45 PM


Helen,
And I missed it? How can that be... When will it happen again? I wanna see, please!

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-04-27 10:54 PM


Oh Helen, this is so sensual and lovely.
Well done.
~Hugs~

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