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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-04-24 01:18 PM







~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2002-04-24 01:26 PM


OMGosh!!!

this is ever stunning....you are just so creative, and you take poetry and graphics to new heights.....*praising you*!!  HUGSSS


Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

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2 posted 2002-04-24 01:31 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my heart, oh my this is utterly utterly wonderful, your pen is perfectly poetical. I love I love it utterly utterly This is seriously excellent writing, the flow of this is perfect, the internal pace and the construction cannot be bettered. And the form, oh how I love it when you are creative darling heart. And this is so spectacular, you just know when you know who sees this she will be asking HOW DO YOU DO THAT? Oh my abominable daughter, love her to death but she’ll wear me to a frazzle, that’ll teach me to try to keep up with her. This is exquisite darling heart, absolutely exquisite

You know I love this don’t you? Of course you do. Absolutely perfect writing

You knew I’d have to reply to this didn’t you, it’s outstanding, truly outstanding writing

And I get to answer before her, she’ll be over later to blitz the joint


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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3 posted 2002-04-24 01:43 PM


Simply awesome.
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4 posted 2002-04-24 04:12 PM


the title alone was pure poetry.
Beautiful in poetic intend and presentation poetess Marge.
mothyme

Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch

Jackson Browne

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5 posted 2002-04-24 05:16 PM


lovely to read, and to look at. Wonderful.

"Why should I live? Why should I do anything? Is there in life any purpose which the inevitable death that awaits me does not undo and destroy?" -Tols

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6 posted 2002-04-24 05:18 PM


Oh my...how did you do this..it is fantastic...I love it...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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7 posted 2002-04-24 05:24 PM


loved it
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2002-04-24 10:00 PM


GreenEyes~
Thank you dear ... it just seemed to write itself~  (sort of)

MarshaLove~
I get so tickled at you and that adorable daughter of yours !  Thanks gal ... I'm real pleased with the way this one turned out~

BSquirrel~
Thanks bunches~


JanetMarie~
Pleases me to know you enjoyed it my friend~

SecretWhisper~
Why, thank you very much~

StarTime~
Truth ?  Saw the lovely background somewhere, swiped it, and the words just fell in place ... well, with a little bit of thought and planning .... really enjoyed the challenge of doing it~  But be aware ... that each word is done separately ... THAT was the challenge in maintaining the flow~

VanDana~
Thank you dear~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2002-04-24 10:23 PM


Auntie Margie girl my absolutely favourite aunt, the one with the magic pen that writes exceptionally well. You know I love this, but then yes like mum I’m a little biased. Not because I wub you, but because I know really good writing when I see it, and this is it. Well written I love it, and yes the words are beautiful, as is the presentation. You’re right to be pleased with it because this is stunning. This one is something very special. I'm printing this and putting it with the Bucket Of Joy. I love it, thank you xxxxx auntie Margie girl, and if I give this a try I will need some help. So I may well send you a little plaintive cry of I’m stuck. Mum won’t be able to do this hehehe

I wub you Auntie Margie xxx

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy


And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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10 posted 2002-04-24 10:30 PM


Wow Marge. This is fantastic. I like it.
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11 posted 2002-04-24 11:14 PM


I'm glad this wasn't an IQ test 'cause it took me three tries to get the words in the right order!

Once I did, however, they spelled out....AWESOME!

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12 posted 2002-04-24 11:36 PM


Totally awesome...just like you!
Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2002-04-25 08:36 AM


Krissy~
Sweetie, you holler ... I'll be there !
LOL@ the playfulness between you and Mum ... gives me a *tickle* at the two of you~

SmartChick~
Awwwwww, thank you sweetie~

Balladeer~
LOL ... It WAS and IQ Test ... DUH !
We know where you scored !
Hey, thanks fella ..~

Martie~
Thanks all wrapped up in a *hug*~

*HUGS* to all~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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14 posted 2002-04-30 03:26 PM


I loved the title of this... but have I ever mentioned that I'm LOUSY with puzzles? LOL I feel awfully blonde... but also terribly proud. *G* For... ta-dah! *G* I FINALLY followed your needle as you wove the words... and it was worth waking my mind up for the exercise. *G*

We just won't mention how long my mind slept... 'kay??? LOL As for IQ... non-existent. *G*

[This message has been edited by suthern (04-30-2002 03:31 PM).]

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Deep in the heart
15 posted 2002-04-30 03:27 PM


That's not fair!  Why can't I do that?
Something to do with talent?  Ok, I just asked

Dee
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16 posted 2002-04-30 06:19 PM


Marge, this is amazing You are a magician.

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

JamesMichael
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17 posted 2002-04-30 06:46 PM


Very nice Marge...James
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18 posted 2002-04-30 07:27 PM


As only you can come up a twist on placing your beautiful words.

Wonderful Marge Wonderful



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