The worth of one candle (response to VAS,s challenge)

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Open Poetry #20

The worth of one candle (response to VAS,s challenge)

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

0 posted 2002-04-29 04:40 PM

One candle
Oasis of hope
In the dark

paladin

[This message has been edited by paladin (04-30-2002 08:18 AM).]

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-04-29 04:51 PM

Paladin,
An awesome 20 or less! Well done...

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-04-29 05:23 PM

Ooo.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-04-29 10:30 PM

(smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, this is a fabulous ten or less poem, may this candle always light up your hearts in times of great need! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2002-04-29 10:58 PM

this is a 3-5-3 syllable count..so i guess this is a haiku..if so, Kudos to you...i write those 5-7-5 haikus rather often but i haven't been able to write a satisfactory 3-5-3 haiku..

Nicely done!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2002-04-30 07:50 PM

Wonderful, powerful image.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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