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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-04-22 09:16 PM

“CLOSER TO BE”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
When the soft wind blows,
caressing my face…
I feel the warmth,
of it’s loving embrace…

It’s like feeling your skin,
touching close to mine…
My heart skips a beat,
then wants to re-align…

Yet the sadness is there,
holding me back from you…
Not knowing where to turn,
at times not having a clue…

I’ve heard your gentle voice,
whispering thoughts to cope…
To embrace you my desire,
closer to be, searching for hope…
~~~~

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2002-04-22 09:29 PM

Bill darling boy this is sooooooooo incredibly wonderful. The depth of this is utterly utterly fabulous, I’m awe-struck by this wonderful piece. You know I love this don’t you.

Utterly utterly perfect poetry, you never cease to amaze me with your skill

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2002-04-22 09:48 PM

Searching for hope, that's me. You said it well Bill.
Be happy.
Sandra

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-04-22 09:49 PM

(sigh) Oh Bill, this is a little bit sad but so very beautiful, sweet friend, I hope now love has grown ever so close to you and true happiness now sings in your heart always! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

4 posted 2002-04-22 09:58 PM

Hello Bill

Your words always paint such a beautiful picture and this was no exception.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2002-04-22 10:44 PM

I have such appreciation for your talent and tender heart. There is no such weakness as love. ThisDiamond

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