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AceoConas
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0 posted 2002-04-20 10:08 PM


I wish I could escape
this feeling
i know I shouldn't hate
but really
if he hadn't killed them
i would still be dreaming
but for now
my life is a nightmare

the curse of the dead
this feeling of dread
these feelings that are kept
bottled up inside
this feeling of dread
is stuck in my head
i know he must be feeling this way too

© Copyright 2002 John Scott - All Rights Reserved
skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars
1 posted 2002-04-20 10:12 PM


Welcome to Passions. You'll like it here. Nice first post, I enjoyed it!

~sky

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Kethry
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2 posted 2002-04-20 10:13 PM


AceoConas,
welcome to passions, this is a very intense piece. I hope to hear more of your writing.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Poet deVine
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3 posted 2002-04-20 10:15 PM


Welcome to the forums....I hope you read the guidelines and feel you can join our group!! If you have any questions, please feel free to contact any of the Moderators.
AceoConas
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4 posted 2002-04-20 10:15 PM


Man, I didn't think i'd be accepted!!
AceoConas
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5 posted 2002-04-20 10:28 PM


PdV, you did see my THANK YOU!!, didn't you?

~* Aceo *~

[This message has been edited by AceoConas (04-20-2002 10:28 PM).]

AceoConas
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6 posted 2002-04-20 10:36 PM


I just want to put this in my library.

~* Aceo *~

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7 posted 2002-04-20 11:18 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh John, this is such a sad but powerful debut poem, sweet friend, my heart goes out to everyone who copes with these feelings! This is an excellent powerful first post, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet John, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your wonderful words! (big huggssssss) I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet John, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
8 posted 2002-04-21 01:09 AM


Welcome!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

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9 posted 2002-04-21 01:47 AM


Welcome. It was a sad write, but you expressed an emotion that needs to be set free. Now be prepared to answer some questions about Alaska. I live in the Fairbanks area, but will soon be heading to the Colorado Rockies. I'll turn my keys to the freezer over to you when I leave.
Welcome to these blue poetry pages.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
10 posted 2002-04-21 08:55 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!
Very well done first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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11 posted 2002-04-21 10:35 AM


HI there--

Welcome to the Blue Pages, of a strong family....you will love it here!!




Hauntingly Sad, and very well written.....I hope you enjoy it here....be well Peace to you...


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

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12 posted 2002-04-21 12:29 PM


Hi there

Nicely written poem you've shared with us!
Welcome to Passions, I know you will absolutely love it here. Please check your email for a special greeting.

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just out of reach
13 posted 2002-04-21 01:16 PM


Welcome to Passions - have fun!! You know...curses such as this CAN be lifted. Well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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14 posted 2002-04-21 08:28 PM



Welcome to Passions!  It is certainly not hard to stay around...have a love of poetry, a bit of wit, and you'll find here, the perfect fit!  Glad to have you aboard!

ThisDiamond
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Michigan, USA
15 posted 2002-04-21 09:48 PM


Hello and welcome.
You have an interesting opening here, and I look forward to reading your work.
Enjoy the talent and topics of these pages, a gift we are all graced to take part in.
ThisDiamond

Titia Geertman
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Netherlands
16 posted 2002-04-22 04:55 PM



Welcome AceoConas, loved your poem.

I'll be looking forward to see more

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

AceoConas
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AK, anchorage
17 posted 2002-04-22 10:50 PM


I didn't think everyone would like my poetry. I have also posted the first part of a book on Prose. Check it out!!

Aceo

[This message has been edited by AceoConas (04-23-2002 07:21 PM).]

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