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Open Poetry #20

Skies that Fall..

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

0 posted 2002-04-18 11:12 PM

Ocean currents have swollen with changes
migrated birds then landed on snow ranges;
as you near the edge of your earthly seat
before the end, think what you will meet.

Will it be a sky that falls when you cross the road
an angelic voice to say there was never an abode;
a system failure when hard drives are installed
or deeds delivered from a stranger, once impaled?

Gone are the days when fallen saints
walked the earth to lay down restraints,
so legends go on and turbulence rises
full of windy gusts and snow bank surprises.

Fallen strangers pointed to meteor showers
and garden experts noted abnormal flowers;
told in the past, skies have already fallen
before any end, shrines will just be forgotten.

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (04-18-2002 11:17 PM).]

skyshine

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since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2002-04-18 11:20 PM

Well stated, ecrivan.

~sky

I'm in charge, and I say question authority!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-04-18 11:24 PM

Martin, just wanted to let you know how much I enjoy and appreciate the way you write. You leave the reader pondering and rereading your post again and again...at least this reader does.
Wonderful thoughts here.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

3 posted 2002-04-18 11:31 PM

Sky

your element came in handy in the poem

thanks for clicking in!

Nancy,

I myself get moments of inspiration..I wish some of my stuff had an even greater impact!
you're comments are always welcome. Now am in the midst of preparing for performing in Montreal Fringe Festival

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