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inspiredpoetwriter
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since 2002-01-05
Posts 104
Minnesota

0 posted 2002-04-18 10:03 PM



Dribble…Dribble…
Spinning around
Fast like the wind of a storm
Falling on the floor
Shattering like a vase
Dripping heart
From the hurt of a lost love.

Dribble…Dribble…
Listen
Can’t you hear her cries?

Alone in a darkened room
On the floor is where she lies
Drenched in her own tears
She awaits the return of her lover
But in the darkest corner of her mind
She knows he is gone forever.

Time passes by so slowly
Her heart grows weary and weak
The more she cries
The faster her heart dies.

Dribble...Dribble...
Listen
Can't you hear the dripping of her broken and bleeding heart?

Heartache that hang's from above
Pain slowly stabbes her heart
Dripping blood all over.

Dribble...Dribble...
Winter cold air frezzes her
Body & soul ice
Words that were s'pose to said
No longer have the chance to get
Out, warmth of the sun settels her
At in harmony in her own heaven's
Of peace that lay her to rest.

¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥

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Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
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1 posted 2002-04-18 10:42 PM




(big hugggssssss) This feels so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to everyone who experiences this kind of heartache and I pray with all my heart that comfort and time will ease the pain and love can again mend the holes! (kiss on cheek) This is so very powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Keith Morgan
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since 2001-10-29
Posts 114
Md
2 posted 2002-04-18 10:57 PM


The hands of love, will catch the drops.  Nicely written piece.  Thanks for sharing.

Write from the soul and the words will flow

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
3 posted 2002-04-18 11:22 PM


you will find a truer love, that on was not meant to be thanks for sharing your pain and suffering with this poem.


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