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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-04-18 06:29 PM


“A TIME AGO”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Once when I was
young I had dreams
for you and I, but
now that the years
have passed my
dreams have left
me in the dust…

Stuff happens
I guess, at least
that’s what I’ve
heard, maybe it’s
true, but all I
know is thoughts
didn’t change today,
it was a time ago…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 2002-04-18 06:38 PM


Bill darling boy this is utterly utterly perfect, do I like it? I love it. Your writing has too long been absent from their rightful place. No one writes emotions quite the same as you do darling boy, this is well written. Absolutely excellent


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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2 posted 2002-04-18 06:55 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Bill, I can feel sadness behind these words, sweet friend, I hope everything is OK and I know deep down some dreams are not meant to be but there will always be meaningful ones that will always come true for us all! (sigh) This is wonderfully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-04-18 08:41 PM


Bill - maybe now it is time to dream new dreams...hmmm? maybe? hmmm? Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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4 posted 2002-04-18 08:43 PM


Yes Bill...time for new dreams....
Enjoyed very much as always.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Eloise
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5 posted 2002-04-18 11:10 PM


To revisit those dreams sometimes feels so good.  Excellent write Bill.
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