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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Weep He turned into my corner of thought tenderly, oh so cautiously…as if he knew what he would find in the word’s eye he lay before me he made warm memories that had not been aired almost forgotten even he did not expect the rush of weep. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
She was wrapped in the folds of my wants keeping warm the dream her weep unexpected was rain on the seeds planted over t i m e |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
There is no greater compliment to one's poetry than poetry returned Thank you, Captain.... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
even he did not expect the rush of weep. Awesome, and going straight to my library. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Thank you Chris...another fine comment to treasure... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
seems a lovely mood here not a sad one can visualize happy tears with sweet flavor enjoyed you |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Truth, sir, not sad... a realization should always be of joyous nature... thank you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is so powerfully bittersweet, sweet friend, I know these kind of memories so very well and when we look in the corner of our eyes we do miss so very much that we may cry upon yet are blessed we have these memories! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
he made warm memories that had not been aired almost forgotten even he did not expect the rush of weep. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ YES!!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Tears....weeping slowly falling, ever softly Felt by skin and eyes complimented by sighs Weeping of the glad joyfully and not sad Flowing ever freely joyful tears, sweetly Nicely written Deca....could sense the emotions flowing... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
in the word’s eye he lay before me I love the way you turn your phrases, Deca... this is excellent work...~many hugs copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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