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vandana
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0 posted 2002-04-17 10:36 AM



Let It shine,
Le It shine
With your heart on mine
I will be fine
If I could see your eyes
Still
Till the morning light
If I could see your eyes,
I will be dreaming
more each day,
I will let It go
on on till
the time Is so right,
To see your eyes
All over again
Shine
deeper Into your eyes,
Alll over again,
Shine
Deeper Into your eyes
Let It shine
Shine like a sun so bright
Brighter than
each day comes
Brighter than
A star shines your eyes
Let It shine
Shine
All the time
Let me
See your eyes,
Shine,
Deeper Into your eyes,
Shine,
Let It shine
Shine
Let me see your eyes
Let me watch the sun and moon
In your eyes,
Let It shine
I know ,
It will hurt me
If I don't see
those shinning stars
On your eyes,
Let It shine
Deeper Into your eyes

[This message has been edited by vandana (04-17-2002 10:38 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-04-17 11:00 AM



Oh Vandana, I think I can do this!


  


Sven
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2 posted 2002-04-17 04:15 PM


you know my friend. . . I know of no one else who writes of love in such a unique and delightful way. . .

well done. . .

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Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-04-17 04:22 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is a beautiful sun-shining poem, sweet friend, your gorgeous wordsw always bring smiles that shine across these pages! (kiss on cheek) May loves whispers always touch your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



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