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Sail Away With Me
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Sail Away With Me |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(This is inspired by our dearest friend SmittenKitten (Krista) and for my love Joanna!  ) Sail Away With Me By: Noah Eaton 4/10/02 Needless to say I need a hot-air balloon When your gentle breath makes me swoon Needless to say I need a kite to fly When I'm swept off my feet lost in your eyes Sail away with me Sail away with me Sail away with me, sweet angel Your sigh is like the Chinook winds that massage the palmettos Sensually summoning the waves to kiss my hearts grove Touch your skin of velvet creamy white I will slumber under your queen Anne lace wings every night Sail away with me Sail away with me Sail away with me, sweet angel Just let me hold you, I'll caress your lips If thou dost love thee, I will spare the moonlight for you Just let me hold you, I'll kiss your lips You are my lotus flower, baptizing me with your endless felicity… You are my lute, you are Hebe You are all the things I believe that make me happy You are like Venus, only heavenlier to me On loves unicorn ride we'll gallop onto eternity Bathing in the waterfalls of the rainbow Sail away with me Sail away with me Sail away with me, sweet angel Just let me hold you, I'll caress your lips If thou dost love thee, I will spare the moonlight for you Just let me hold you, I'll kiss your lips You are my lotus flower, baptizing me with your endless felicity… On the wind we will sail, hand in hand On the wind to our dreams… [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-10-2002 01:15 PM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Your sigh is like the Chinook winds that massage the palmettos ================================ now thats a wonderful image and analogy... Noah...love looks good on you  love that pic too. I'm sure the sincerety of this will be felt across the distance. Well done poet sir |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well done Noah.. I am sure it will be felt across the miles... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Interesting write my friend. Check your thees and thous ... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"On the wind to our dreams." Very nice Noah...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Noah! This is a wonderful write... and I love the picture as well! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I love that same line that Janet Marie enjoyed too..loved all your words hon..as always very romantic..hugss  ~Victoria |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - a gem of a write indeed. This is just beautiful, your soft heart does wonders with your soft pen... BC |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
What a wonderful thought Noah to just sail away. Sounds so wonderful and free. floria Floria |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Noah, Noah, Noah, Woo Hoo! Goodness, you have the sweetest heart. Just a wonderful write but everything you write IS! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Beautiful Noah...simply beautiful!!!! |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
"Needless to say I need a kite to fly When I'm swept off my feet lost in your eyes" Beautiful write!! Dark A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Sensually summoning the waves to kiss my hearts grove Touch your skin of velvet creamy white I will slumber under your queen Anne lace wings every night" SweetNoah~ *I* inspired this? Oh sweet Noah, I don't know how! You have such a romantic and loving heart, you always have that kind of beauty waiting to flow out through your words. This will be tenderly placed into my library to remind me that there is hope for true love out there...that I will have those feelings someday too. Beautiful Noah. Thank you so much for making me somehow a part of it Hugs, ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
*sneaks back in*  woopsy...I forgot to add it to my library! But it gave me an excuse to come back and read it again |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
man...maybe it's time for me to go to bed, I'm sorry for flooding your lovely page Noah, I won't forget to add it this time! Double sorry!Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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