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paladin
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0 posted 2003-04-08 08:22 PM


Covering the lawn
Dense carpet in shades of brown
Thoughts of greener days

paladin

....a knight without armor

© Copyright 2003 Robert E. Jackson - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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1 posted 2003-04-08 08:28 PM


So simple, so beautiful. Enjoyed the read of this
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-04-08 09:16 PM


What a strange carpet
the rain weaves with its pattern
of leaves and brown twigs ~

Well done poet sir!
Good to see you here with the style you are so well known for.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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3 posted 2003-04-08 11:21 PM






(big hugggssssss) Yes, and knowing that spring is here, know that life is full of blessings and rejuvenation, God Bless You, this is uplifting, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2003-04-09 03:41 PM



sounds of blade sharpened
whacking of rotary blade
smell the green in cut

Patricia
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5 posted 2003-04-09 03:54 PM


The "greener" will soon be here again.


Justbleu
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6 posted 2003-04-09 03:58 PM


I love these little poems.....so much from so little!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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7 posted 2003-04-09 04:17 PM


It's still winter here,
it's still winter were I am
spring should be here soon.

I enyoyed your haiku

Never be normal!

garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-04-09 04:19 PM



Hey, fellow Northwest Floridian  
You are a master at doing these little  
poems. I love them. In fact, I think I'll
go try to do one.

Hugs,
Ethel

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