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GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

0 posted 2003-03-21 11:42 AM

Chewing cheek chatter
While legs shift desperately
       Up
          and
    Down.

Listening, feeling…
While hands in pockets
Fisted firm...
Nails in flesh
Reaffirm.

Wide eyes wonder
       Back
   And
          Forth.
Brows furl in confusion,
T e r r o r.

Readjusting from the chair
Stuck on sweaty
Cloth of limbs.

Speak, speak
still unknowing.
Seems it’s strong
To the weak.
And my feeble fears are
S h o w i n g.

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

[This message has been edited by GG (03-21-2003 11:53 AM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-03-21 11:45 AM

Goodness this one reminds me of going to the dentist - excellent write here G xxoo

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2003-03-21 11:48 AM

littlewing,
hadn't even thought of that lol but I guess it does seem a lot like a dentist visit! Thanks for replying, love seeing what other people view from it.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-03-21 01:11 PM

I'm feeling all twitchy and nervous now! lol

My first thought was of sitting in a dentist's chair--my second one was of me sitting in class waiting for the exam paper to be placed on my desk!

Well done!

Peace & Love,
EA

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

4 posted 2003-03-21 01:27 PM

EA,
thanks ..lol you're right it could also very well be sitting in class waiting for a paper. When I wrote it I was thinking of sitting while someone verbally pounded on you for something.. but tried to put it in words that could relate to more than one thing. Again, thank you

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

5 posted 2003-03-21 01:52 PM

The first thing that popped into my mind was high school speeches *shudders* I hated those things LOL.
Well done

Tara

"wake me up inside
call my name and save me from the dark"
-Bring Me To Life by Evanescence

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

6 posted 2003-03-21 01:57 PM

wowee...you're cut off from the coffee :-)

KS

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

7 posted 2003-03-22 08:34 AM

Tara,
can't stand speeches! which reminds me, I think I have one coming up soon. I think its funny that I'm in highschool and was writing regarding a relationship and you all are thinking of hishschool lol ..thanks for the reply

Kristie,
its 5:30 AM here, trust me, I NEED my caffeine! It only Makes me a tinsy bit jittery

..thanks for reading and replying.

Always, Alyssa
Always,

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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