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A Song of Debris
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A Song of Debris |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Song of debris I am a bit of flotsam wear Echoing my dreams and prayers Singing silent melodies Searching for some remedies. Fragment of a lineage Parcel of a pilgrimage Cabal of a cabal sown This one made of flesh and bone. Microscope in the rhyme A bit of sand in flowing time An innocent of consciousness Dimension of dimensionless. A thing so small the overall There is no word to size the small But yet I dare to laugh in wit For in my mind the shoe don’t fit. So this is why I sing off key Am I here or yet to be? |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: So you...so true... 'tis not a song of debris... but fact that you are singing poetry... Good, good morning, Sy.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thank you love,  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! May I ask...when do you write these? Late at night or early in the morn? or..perhaps Randy helps you? Oooh so full of questions this ayem I know. At any rate....tis beautiful...tea's on. ~morning hugs~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Fragment of a lineage Parcel of a pilgrimage Cabal of a cabal sown This one made of flesh and bone. Microscope in the rhyme A bit of sand in flowing time An innocent of consciousness Dimension of dimensionless. =================================== As I read thine rhymes it occurs to me... only thee could turn "debris" into poetry.  Cabal of a cabal sown This one made of flesh and bone. and those will be my waaaay cool lines of the day...have I ever told ya youre groovy? *L*  *winkiewinkie*   The Sun The Moon The Stars The Sky |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
No, Seymour, I think not this is a song of debris, but a song of poetry.  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! You could sing your songs off-key, and I would still listen!--but I must admit that it is much easier on my ears that you have perfect pitch!  Sing away, Dear Sonneteer! Peace, Love & Light, EA |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - I am in awe yet again. How you manage to come up with such wisdom in words so lovely, everyday, boggles the mind. All I can say is....slice of banana bread this morning? hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If you are a fragment, I'm awed at the thought of what the whole might be like... the talent would be overwhelming. *S* I like this very much, Seymour... your songs are always easy on the ears. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, I never really know when a line is going to hit me, but when it does I can usually make a poem out of it. Tea would be fine. Hugs JM, Groovy, you mean like the movie? Randy thinks he favores Valentino. He enjoyed your commet. I can only send you WWRS Ethel, Did I ever tell you are the geatest. Earth Angel That deserves a thank you.Chris, What would I do without your sweets, hugs. suthern Out of my quota of kisses so I'm sending HUGS. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Microscope in the rhyme A bit of sand in flowing time An innocent of consciousness Dimension of dimensionless. I liked that verse also. Your poetry sings Sy! |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
Good good. I greatly enjoyed reading this. I could learn a thing or two from your manipulation of meter and rhyme. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade Even thought I sing off key, LOL Eromyna Enjoyed your reply, thank you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Debris? Never! In fact, with every poem you write every morning, it seems your vocal chords never get strained! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, much appreciated this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, You have resurrected me again, thank you. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I like it probably is best sung off key Gloom |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - you do write some good stuff, I like it... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor, Your right about that, LOL. Bill, Thank you Bill. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Know what? I sing off key too - and so what, right?...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, |
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