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Letting Go
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Letting Go |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes 
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I let her go today And she's not coming back I guess she just wasn't mine She was looking at me She was seeing him Lost in the love he gave her Trapped in the love I had Torn between the worlds of both She couldn't move on I wouldn't let her go She didn't want to leave I could see the confusion in her eyes If I loved her why did I set her free Why would I push her to him No, I didn't lie My mind didn't change The choice was simple She's happy there Easy decision, hard to do I loved her So I let her go ~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
OMG Ringo - this is much too much real for me - Im so sorry . . . she may not be as happy as you think - tears here for this one xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-15-2003 01:22 AM).] |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
:-/ sometimes when you love something, you have to set it free... and sometimes it comes back to you.... for you to be happy, I really hope it does... |
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lost_star Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114NY, U.S.A |
It's not always what you leave behind but what you don't see ahead of you...Great poem!!! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
There is a grace and beauty in a letting go...your words show this so well. Eric |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
 ... Sad, and beautiful.. Thank you for sharing dear friend.  Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Ringo...Enjoyed your heartfelt words. Perhaps she will return as quickly as she left...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Again, I thank you all for the kind words and encouragement. ~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one... |
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