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Open Poetry #25

Trying to Breathe...

Mollie963
Junior Member

since 2003-02-12

Posts 14

0 posted 2003-03-12 11:07 PM

A fading light
Pull me out
I am underneath
Trying to breathe

You said you would
I see you could
I know you won't
Though you should

I already know you
You seem to forget
We started at the top
It wasn't time to fall yet

A defeaning tick
A cruel telling of the hour
One more petal
Left on the flower

Naive hope
But love me not
It falls up
With a love you forgot

[This message has been edited by Mollie963 (03-14-2003 04:34 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-03-12 11:09 PM

This is such a sad story. But beautifully written.

Cold hands means a warm heart

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2003-03-13 06:43 AM

*sigh* this is beautiful.. sad, painful. Maybe its just today, but *sigh*

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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