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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-03-12 03:32 PM


Toys

She was only jerking me off
and telling me that I'm cute.
Playing games with me.
Her toys a poor substitute.
I've been there and done that
when I was still a boy.
But now I'm a grown man
and I no longer have a
need for toys.

JamesLee
March12
2003

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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-03-12 03:35 PM


may i ask, maybe im dense, but what kind of toys are we talknig of>
Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-03-12 04:05 PM


I am guessing that it is metaphorical or it would be in another section. My interpetations is the writer is fed up with her immature head-games.
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-03-12 04:33 PM


Thank you inkedgoddess and Brad...
When I was a little boy I was happy with my toys but now that I am a man and have the desires and needs of a man I have no use for toys...I want the real thing...I don't want to play games with a little girl...I want a woman with similar desires and needs...James

Ericc
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4 posted 2003-03-12 04:42 PM


This is a very powerful statement.
Nicely written.
Eric

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