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Sunkissed
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 610


0 posted 2003-03-12 01:58 PM



She got an inner ear buzz
& thought the hazy  recollection
resembled my reflection through
tainted gaze of another
like the father & mother
this child never knew
pegged me, tied legged me
complete with tar & feather
perhaps it's nice weather
for the bearing of strange
fruit
& when the time is ripe
will she go a pickin' again?

in defense of impotent friend,
ofcourse...

sunkissed.


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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2003-03-12 02:04 PM


sounds like the friendship is kind of strained right now
hard hiting stuff

Ericc
Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-03-12 04:45 PM


Wow...very strongly written!
Eric

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