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vandana
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0 posted 2003-03-10 01:54 PM


If you only could see the light
Coming this direction through
the open door
If only time would tell us
Where love can hold on
Is way
Through the day
and night
Love would stay longer
If only time would tell us
If only time could see on our eyes
Are saying the words
The whisper calls
through the wind
If only time would stay with us
And when you lay
All your love
On my shoulder
And love on my shoulder
And set my mind off
To somewhere else
I think of summer nights
That the sun sets on the hills
And where you see time passes by
quickly
If only time would tell us
If only time can say
If only time.........

[This message has been edited by vandana (03-10-2003 01:54 PM).]

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Margherita
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1 posted 2003-03-10 06:55 PM


Enjoyed this somehow sad song .... but love is there ... enjoy the NOW.
Love, Margherita

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-03-10 07:05 PM


Lovely Vandana!  So much enjoyed.
Reminded me of the song Only Time by Enya.
~Hugs & Smiles~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2003-03-10 07:08 PM


lovely work... I enjoyed
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4 posted 2003-03-10 10:42 PM


T  i  m  e

can be such a hard word, healing word, and full of mystery....I so enjoyed this....hugsss


Lauren~

Take me where the tides start
So I can pull you into me

BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2003-03-10 11:48 PM


If only time would last a little longer...

Very nice vandana~

Logan
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6 posted 2003-03-11 05:44 PM


How very lovely. Enjoyed this very much...very gentle smile
Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2003-03-11 08:15 PM




(sigh) You know what they say, time heals all wounds and all the dividends will be made and the blessings be mortgaged to the heart where love will find a way! (big hugggssssss) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, may those summer nights last on and on in you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

wandering glider
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8 posted 2003-03-12 12:23 PM


vandana,
the only real time is 'now', this time
be present in the now
you will have all the time you need
and all the time there is

w.g.

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