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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-03-07 11:37 AM



If i needed someone

To sweep me under new carpet
so i age with old beginnings
i would call you

I need someone to polish the dull
cleanse the rot
multiply the bacteria of yourself
and kill me why not?

If i needed someone

To crunch over my drive
that drove me here
so far up the wall to the end
i can hear them singing
on the other side

And its not you

Here and there loose chippings
childish feet
dont care of consequence
of having nobody

If you should call me.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
1 posted 2003-03-07 01:16 PM




Sitting wide-eyed here. Whoa!

I like this Gemma.


Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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2 posted 2003-03-07 04:04 PM


Gemma I'm proud to say I joined with you on the same day..i can look back and say why yes i used to write with gemma..yes she is brilliant
garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
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3 posted 2003-03-07 04:11 PM


Gemma, this is really amazing. It's so powerful and really does make a person sit back and say WOW!!!  

Hugs,
Ethel Mae

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-03-08 03:50 AM


very powerful write! I enjoyed!
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