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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
Rhymes This poem is all about rhyme - it won't make sense half the time. Rhymes run through a poet's heart So many words, where do we start? Rhymes rage and rapidly run used for structure or just simple fun. Gives it balance and adds some tone going without ever leaving home. Gives it description and content gives us clues and little hints. Makes us smile and makes us laugh so hard we nearly collapse. Makes us cry a tear or river Makes us cringe and even quiver. Allows our minds to imagine and wonder is it God or merely thunder? Takes us on a journey and a little excursion when we need a simple diversion. Lifts us up when we are down lets us hear when there is no sound. Reminds us of people we have known and places we have been shown. Lets us run while we walk gives the quite kid a chance to talk. Help us in so many ways - rhymes, how can we ever repay? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Rhymes were in my nursery schemes, passed my time and grew my dreams, rhymes were taught in beat of heart, and from my rhymes I shall not part... enjoyed this RK.... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh James, this is wonderful, sweet friend, rhyme truly is the tempo of God, it makes everything come alive and so much more possible that has yet to be recorded in the studio of life! (big hugggssssss) This is fantastic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love to read and write rhyme. Together, rhyme and rhythm make up the melody of a poem's song! Loved the title--and your rhymes! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wonderfuly written! Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a write! enjoyed the read tonight! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A rhyme here a rhyme there We love to rhyme all the time This we like to do me and you So the melody we can hear and see |
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