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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-03-06 08:16 AM




I belong to the end of
your reach.

An extension of your touch...that has slipped
the edge of territories -
And continued on its way.

I am filled to the point of holding
only you.

Yet still I pray for more.




© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-03-06 08:57 AM



Now here is a classic
IWIHWT...

truly!

WhiteRose
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2 posted 2003-03-06 09:15 AM


I am filled to the point of holding
only you.
Yet still I pray for more.


Yes, I know this feeling.

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-03-06 09:17 AM


May your prayers be forever answered!

Warm morning hugs,
Earth Angel

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4 posted 2003-03-06 12:29 PM


This is love.

beautiful!

Sukissed.

"I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..."

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5 posted 2003-03-06 12:38 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Eric, I know this feeling ever so well, sweet friend, sometimes I just want to hang on there even when it seems hopeless and I risk falling off my end! (sigh) I wish for this happiness to always reach to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

cinnamongirl
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6 posted 2003-03-06 09:07 PM


Amen.  Beautiful sense of longing and love in a prayer...

Thank you... you are a wonderful Listener.

Love,
Moca

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7 posted 2003-03-07 03:17 AM


very nice
1slick_lady
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8 posted 2003-03-07 03:44 AM


"I belong to the end of
your reach."

what can i say except...OMG...you blow me away...this could have stood alone...the rest was wonderful too btw...gripping...but i AM a sucker for romance...helen  

ps...is this the line for the eric fan club?
oh good first in line

Margherita
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9 posted 2003-03-07 09:05 PM


How wonderful to reach out and find who reaches out for us.
TOUCHED!
Beautiful!
Love, Margherita


icequeen
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10 posted 2003-03-07 09:13 PM




You have an awesome way with words. You are blessed with a real gift! Beautiful.

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11 posted 2003-03-07 09:13 PM


Shivers...this one gave me ...good shivers!
Much enjoyed Eric!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Martie
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12 posted 2003-03-07 09:15 PM


Ericc--So much said in these few words...but love is that way.  
littlewing
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13 posted 2003-03-07 11:31 PM


Ericc - goodness I KNOW what this feels like - conveyed it beautifully xxoo
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