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Sunkissed
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0 posted 2003-03-04 01:16 PM



Moodier than late summer sun
burning skies with broiling
color
More mysterious than a moonless
midnight, Unseen but ever felt
More alive, deeper than, &
as immeasurable as any ocean
or sea

This is the beginning of my
love for you

Imagine what you might find
on your life long journey to
the end...


Sunkissed.

"I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..."

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Phantom Poet
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since 2003-03-03
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1 posted 2003-03-04 01:48 PM


perhaps untitled but really does words from ones heart need a title?
>>phantom poet<<

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2 posted 2003-03-04 01:50 PM


nicely written my friend...

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
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3 posted 2003-03-04 02:09 PM




"As immeasurable as any ocean"

And so it seems. Wonderful poem.


Enjoyed, hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Sunkissed
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4 posted 2003-03-04 06:20 PM


You're right, Phantom.  Thank you for reading...

Captain, your comments are always appreciated, Thank you.

Pat, it's always good to see your thoughts on any work. Thank you.

Hugs to all...

Sunkissed.

"I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..."

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