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Ssssssshhhhhhhhh . . .
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Ssssssshhhhhhhhh . . . |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Coursing through my veins thicker than that of my own blood You reside One half of my heart lies with me The other half across the sea Min drommer mit hjerte aldit kys |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
Very interesting. I like it a lot, love the coursing through my veins. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
strong but a bit sad |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Glad you posted it afterall, still sorry you had to write it. I love the sad ones but hate that people have to write them. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Sue, this is so very sadly touching, sweet friend, this is heartfelt and I hope soon you find your other half again and live happily ever after! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Keep that blood flowing within your heart. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is beautiful, but sad. I like your work.. Hugs, Ethel  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Excellent.....just excellent! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfect...simply perfect! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
that is very very good the Wind is invisible. |
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sweetwater Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 178Perth |
beautifully written. so simple yet powerful emotion.. enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Beautiful! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
littlewing--it's good to have love, even if it is far away, it's part of you. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you so very much everyone - TY Aenimal xxoo - this was a painful one but is history so felt good to get it out - all of you are much kind with such comforting praise - Thank you! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I like the first line especially, this is felt, and felt deep. Great write. Though I feel strong and.. lonely, now. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Ellen Junior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 35 |
This is beautiful but so sad...I have two granddaughters in the Navy and AirForce over seas. It feels like part of my heart went with them, any ways, terrific write. |
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Phantom Poet Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 116Arizona USA |
heart felt thoughts are always great!! >>phantom poet<< |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I've heard it said that love blows in all directions, and you're lucky that a part of your love lives on in your heart, after all that's where it starts. Nice writing littlewing~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Alyssa - so sorry that is what I was trying to convey TY Ellen - am so terribly sorry that you are going through that - xxoo Phantom - Ty for your kind words Blues - so true my friend so very true TY |
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