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Two Hearts |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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Our two hearts united With respect, passion, desire With love for each other Coming from inside Where deepest emotions are kept And guarded carefully Love was hid away And thought to be never again Felt like as before Our love is not exactly The same as was before with others It is even stronger Love between the two of us This deep love we share, is like no other Bringing us ultimate happiness Like we have never had before More joy, peace, fulfillment, contentment Than experienced in entire lives Our two hearts united With respect, passion, desire With love for each other ~*~ ~*~ This is slightly redone from other forum |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl It doesn't get better then that.  |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
This is the love that everyone aspires to, and few achieve... congrats. .. and it's a really good poem besides. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Seymour....  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Ringo. I appreciate that... Hugs, Ethel |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
A beautiful poem, with a happy hopeful feeling. Sandra |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Sandra... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Ethel, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile a sso many of your beautiful words do! (kiss on cheek) May you and Gary's heart forever sing together in the symphony of true love, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
.... ultimate happiness! Wow. This is beautifully encouraging. Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very encouraging, yes... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ethel - lovely. I am so happy for you. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Ethel, I really like this sounds like Gary is like his dad they just melt us dont they? Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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Phantom Poet Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 116Arizona USA |
oh what tender feelings all i can say is WoW!!! < |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You are certainly enjoying your Passions, aren't you?  |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
trhis was a great poem, and I really loved the font. Brought out the romanticness (is that even a word?) congradulations on your 7000th! the Wind is invisible. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I think you should try being a moderater, you respond to allmost everyone, and are here all the time/ the Wind is invisible. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ethel, Congratulations of your 7,000. I didn't see this poem before. As usual, just as lovely as the others. Enjoyed, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Ethel The love in your heart shined throughout your lovely words. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, thank you for your sweet words. Mrgherita, thanks for liking the poem. Dixie, thank you, friend. Vandana, glad that you enjoyed. Kacy, thank you. I appreciate it. Rita, yeah, Gary sure melts me!! Phantom Poet, thank you. Karilea, oh yes, I'm sure enjoying my love. Liz, I'm glad you like the poem. Yeah, I've thought about trying to be a moderator. But, since I've been sick, I'm not on here as much as I used to be. Pat, thank you and I'm glad that you like the poem. Sue, thank you. I really appreciate all of you reading and replying to my poem. Heart Hugs, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-05-2003 12:31 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Here's to love...James |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
A lady in love writes the most beautiful thoughts straight from her heart!!! Ethel, you know how much I enjoyed reading this!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
heartfelt and ringing true your words as always, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
always lovely when you share your feelings about Gary. I hope you are feeling better. hugsss M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
As they say, "Two hearts are better than one!"--or is that two "heads"?!? tehe Lovely as usual! Warm morning hugs from a frozen Cannuck! Linda |
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prof.pishnu Junior Member
since 2003-03-05
Posts 21 |
hi, your poem is a very touching, id like to say descriptive but it seems harsh i guess. I always get confused about this subject(subject being love and absolution), i also get scared, I can say that your poem tells of a place I could only reach after alot suffering. I'm happy you've reached your place of course, maybe you have a follow up concerning of what you went through to get there... i dunno i feel outta place saying this =/ sorry V. Good poem though, enjoyed it alot, put pictures in my head to =/ |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
  what more can be said Thomas |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Thomas..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ethel, loved it! You must have a heart full of love to keep writing all these beautiful love poems.  Hope you're feeling a bit better, Marti |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Marti. I think I'm a litle better. Trying to stay in out of the rain. How are you? Love and Hugs, Ethel |
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