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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-02-28 11:21 AM

Watching the fire
spitting its touch to reach me
smoke signals to the heavens
scattering ashes when embers burn out
like remains of fire
so evident you've been here
and scorched your way through green
spilt night sky upon my ground
so i kiss you for burning me deeper.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-02-28 11:24 AM

gemjop
Nothing like a little twist, enjoyed.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-02-28 12:57 PM

I love the imagery. I give this a 2 thumbs up.

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-02-28 12:59 PM

oooooo, very vivid! i love it!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-02-28 01:00 PM

"Hot" stuff!

If you are impervious to fire, then keep those homefires burning!

Have a great day!
Earth Angel

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-02-28 08:35 PM

(smiles) Oh Gemma, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love the sensuality of this, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2003-02-28 09:22 PM

enjoyed

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-02-28 10:16 PM

very nice gemma

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-02-28 10:47 PM

Hello, friend

I liked....

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-28-2003 10:51 PM).]

rkcraig
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

9 posted 2003-02-28 10:51 PM

I love this poem. Sounds like you were in love and still are.

The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love another.

ben_pelling
Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 59
Isle of Wight UK.

10 posted 2003-02-28 10:51 PM

WOW! the calibur of all these poems is huge i really enjoyed reading this one tho

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