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Open Poetry #25

Depth of disception

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2003-02-27 07:10 PM

Breathless, I run
I run so fast
Away from all my thoughts
my thoughts selfish
My pride selfish
breathless I run
I'm not having fun
My mind runs away
to the depths of craze
my heart is a blaze
of threats to my selfishness
tearing me apart
leaving everyone in the dark
where do I start
the begining has no end
I can't bend over backwards
to please everyone
its a war, almost not worth fighting for
I've given up before
I knocked myself right out the door
now... what is it more?

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-27 07:19 PM

This poem makes you think. I loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

[This message has been edited by the_loner_23 (02-27-2003 07:32 PM).]

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

2 posted 2003-02-27 07:27 PM

why?

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-02-28 10:17 AM

Sometimes it feels like you should jsut give it up but them you know deep inside that you will regret it if you do.

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