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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-02-27 09:26 AM



Darkness

I’m slipping into darkness
A place I’ve seen before
It is a place I do not want to be in
But I can’t seem to find the door
My dreams are fading fast
I’m slipping into the past
I can hold on to myself
But the feeling isn’t right
I wish to be held by another
Someone to hold me at night

"This we know - the Earth does not belong to man - man belongs to the Earth." Chief Seattle

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-02-27 10:16 AM


Very well written
Thomas119gold
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2 posted 2003-02-27 10:19 AM


To be held helps keep the dark away

I like the concept
loved the poem

Thomas

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3 posted 2003-02-27 03:38 PM


I have been in this darkness. It is not fun, but I can assure you, it will one day lift.

Hugs, Marti

Dwelling on the negative simply
contributes to its power.   
Shirley MacLaine

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4 posted 2003-02-28 04:53 AM


I know this feeling well, you are not alone
SmartChick
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5 posted 2003-02-28 08:28 AM


Oh yes! I have this same desire.
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6 posted 2003-02-28 08:46 PM




(big hugggssssssss) I think we all dream of such a thing, dearest friend, my heart goes out to you and I am confident soon you will have all you desire, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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