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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2003-02-24 05:58 AM



Did I Miss Those Clues

At this point in time
I honestly don't know
Part of me says hold on
Part of me says to let go

Its so hard to decide
While I'm still yearning
Through sleepless nights
Mind tossing and turning

Making up my mind
Again I am hesitating
Still clinging on hopefully
Each day  procrastinating

I wanted you to know
Though you're far away
In mind and heart forever
The depth of feelings stay

I am with you so often
Throughout  my memory
Perhaps you gave signs
That I was refusing to see

Did I miss those clues
Back and forth I trace
I pondered your intentions
Of every secret embrace

My heart is still waiting
As the weeks pass by
Your silence is hurting me
Yet I cannot say goodbye


Hope ©2003

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-02-24 01:11 PM


This is beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
2 posted 2003-02-24 01:58 PM




I really like this Hope, and can be applied in more than one situation


Enjoyed, Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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