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SmartChick
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0 posted 2003-02-23 07:58 PM



Focusing On My dreams
~ By Sue ~

It is only when I am still
I start thinking of you
My love for you was real
As well as the pain inside too

If my love for you had been fake
It would not be so hard
To just stop thinking about you
And you would no longer be in my heart

There was no pretending
When I was there with you
I gave all I could give
There was nothing more I could do

As I sit here in this house alone
I wait for that one certain day
When all of the pain I now feel
Has just all gone away

Until that special day
I just keep myself so busy
And focus on the dreams I have
That mean so much to me

2-23-03




© Copyright 2003 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-23 08:00 PM


You've got it right Sue...
Focus on your own dreams now...it's your turn.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-02-23 08:50 PM


This is so beautifully written Sue.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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3 posted 2003-02-24 11:56 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Yes, you must focus on your heart and dreams first, as happiness begins with yourself then can spread to another when the time is right! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-02-25 12:24 PM


Very nice...those that belong in our dreams will fit themselves in...James
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5 posted 2003-02-25 01:12 AM


Sue, I love the way you wrote this,
even if it was sad. Sorry, I didn't see
it before now......

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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6 posted 2003-02-25 04:14 AM


very uplifting! keep healing!
Sunnyone
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7 posted 2003-02-25 07:41 AM


Sue, this is wonderful....I am so very glad to have read this one from you, and really truly enjoyed the positive ending. You're out of the shadows, and heading into the light!!!!  Good to see you!!!  

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen!  ~~S~~

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