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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-23 06:30 AM



Shiver

when I
think
of you
I tremble
and wonder
how
one man
can
make me
lose control



"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (02-23-2003 02:29 PM).]

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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
1 posted 2003-02-23 08:48 AM


You know, I have often wondered this myself.
the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-02-23 11:12 AM


This makes me think of Liam.

Cold hands means a warm heart

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-02-23 11:14 AM


Yep, Helen...my man certainly does that to me...

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

Thomas119gold
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4 posted 2003-02-23 05:38 PM


My you held just right to stop that shiver before day turns to night
Thomas

Thomas119gold
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5 posted 2003-02-23 05:42 PM


My you be held tight to stop the shiver before day turns to night

Cpat Hair
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6 posted 2003-02-24 03:12 PM


such shivers do unsettle....

nicely done my friend.. nicely done..

Robert Frazier
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7 posted 2003-02-24 04:09 PM


your poetry always moves me...

Rf

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8 posted 2003-02-25 12:22 PM


This definitely reminds me of someone... and how delicious those shivers are! *S* I like this very much!!!
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