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EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2003-02-22 11:57 PM


This here is a repost because I wanted this one considered for publication in the upcoming passions book. ;-)

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Love and Hate
Day and Night
Birth and Death
Wrong and Right

Faith and Hope
I want to cry
Peace and Joy
I want to die

White and Black
Peace and War
Better and Worse
Rich and Poor

Despair and loss
I want to share.
Who are you?
I want to care.

Heaven and Hell
Mean and Nice
Light and Darkness
Fire and Ice

Up and Down
Hot and Cold
Sun and Moon
Young and old

What is love?
Do I really care?
…Searching for something already there…
For you I send a prayer.

Late and early
Snow and Rain
Angels and Demons
Pleasure and Pain

How can I pray for you this night?
For if I could,
and if I might,
For you I’d make it seem alright.

There’s nothing in this heart for you, but, yes, I would still die for you.

...I would strip myself of this cruel mortal coil for thee..

You are an angel,
flying high,
Do not be fooled,
You'll never die.

I have sent you nothing but angels, and I have placed nothing but miracles before you.

© Copyright 2003 Joseph Alexander Knob - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2003-02-23 12:20 PM


Very nice writing...James
Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-02-23 12:23 PM


this aches fellow sufferer of human plague

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (02-23-2003 12:29 AM).]

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-02-23 12:47 PM




(big hugggssssss) This is so hauntingly beautiful, sweet friend, even amidst all the darkness and shrill cries, there is innocence, faith, strength, in the wind beneath ones wings where love always finds a way! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, you have my most enthusiastic vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joseph, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-02-23 04:02 AM


certainly to be considered! got my vote!
Chanson
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle
5 posted 2003-02-23 12:33 PM


Simplicity speaks volumes.
Enjoyed. *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2003-02-23 12:45 PM


I enjoyed the yin-yang of this piece.

Warm hugs,
EA

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2003-02-24 01:15 AM


EagleScorpion - consider my vote for the book for this writing. Back to the top...

BC

Midnitesun
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8 posted 2003-02-24 02:24 AM


I'm glad you've posted this one for the book, as I think it's one of your best. Yes, a vote for the EagleScorpion.
Munda
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The Hague, The Netherlands
9 posted 2003-02-24 06:37 AM


Really enjoyed this.
Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
10 posted 2003-02-25 12:47 PM


A poem chalk full of paradigms.....very cool!!!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink


Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
11 posted 2003-02-25 01:23 PM


You've penned a very interesting, and enjoyable poem here.

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.



DawnG
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12 posted 2003-02-27 10:28 PM


A repost this may be but one very worthy of the book to me.

                          Dawn

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
13 posted 2003-02-27 10:58 PM


EagleScorpion - I'm glad you posted this for the book. You have my vote...

BC

the_loner_23
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14 posted 2003-02-27 11:00 PM


This is just breathe taking.

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
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Canada
15 posted 2003-02-27 11:02 PM


This fits us Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

GOlDsparklESS
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central nj
16 posted 2003-02-28 02:12 PM


(justbleu- i think you mean PARADOXES!!

comforting/terrifying poem, joseph.  

aries_luv_ppl
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Universal Mind
17 posted 2003-03-04 11:13 PM


nice

~Every girl has a dream within.

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