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The Rain |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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The rain falls steadily As they lower her coffin Into the shallow grave And she is at peace forever Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Definitely a good poem, even if it is a bit short.  What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I am speechless and there is nothing more I can say but my thoughts and angel hugs are with you in your loss! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, know she will always love you and guide you with her love, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The sadness is deeply felt. Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It does seem to come to this...we have to die to find real peace...nice writing...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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