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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-02-20 07:48 AM


Next Week

I'm breaking up with my girlfriend.
Yes it's really true.
It's one of those things
I'm going to make it through.
I don't really want to
but it's come to this.
I hardly ever see her
or share in her sweet kiss.
I'm breaking up with my girlfriend.
What else can I do.
If she was your girlfriend
you'd break up with her too.
She tells me she'll make time for me
and then she doesn't do it.
I'm sick of her lies.
I'm tired of going through it.
I'm breaking up with my girlfriend.
She's not all that sweet.
I probably should tell her.
Yeah first thing next week.
It's really hard for me to say goodbye.
I'll probably just stop calling.
If she should wonder why
I'll say my phone bill is appaling.
I can't stand the way she's treating me.
Have the decency to set me free.
I'm not good at this.
She's not all that sweet.
I probably should tell her.
Yes I'll tell her first
thing next week.

JamesLee
February18
2003



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gemjop
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1 posted 2003-02-20 08:27 AM


Oh James, if this is a real present thing going on in ur life, then do it my friend,let go. you'll suprise yourself how happy you'll be without her. after all the feelings of not being appreciated, being ignored, and treated bady, lied to, will all be long gone.
well written james
lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-02-20 12:47 PM


what are we gonna do with you?
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-02-20 05:36 PM


Thank you gemgob and passing shadows...we'll see what happens next week...ha...James
majnu
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4 posted 2003-02-20 08:17 PM


that it isn't is - always first thing tomorrow or next week or whatever - the last line is the poem.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-02-20 08:48 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh James, I'm sorry things are not working again but you are doing the right thing if she is making you unhappy! (sad sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
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6 posted 2003-02-20 09:07 PM


Ahhh James....come here and I'll give ya a hug!
Then we'll go outside and have a snowball fight!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2003-02-23 01:34 AM


Thank you majnu, Noah and Enchantress for responding...this is a very hard decision for me that seems to desire a long process...she has made some concessions to me but I am not sure of her sincerity just yet...alright Enchantress now its time for that snowball fight...James
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