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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-02-20 10:56 AM


I long for the simpler times
  of yesterdays past
When the heartbeat of Life
  had a comforting cadence
Everyone knew what to
  expect from their world
For there was a sense of
  security in the day-to-day
  sameness
Alas, familiarity has given
  way to change
Soft breezes of gentler days
  have turned harsh and
   these winds of change are
    gathering speed as they
      sweep us down the
       information highway...
Faster
   and faster
       and faster
            and....
STOP!!!...I want to get off!!!

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (02-20-2003 01:23 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-20 11:07 AM


I like the end of the poem. I really liked this.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-02-20 11:15 AM


Julie ~

Thank you for reading my poem and it pleases me that you liked it!

Have a great day!
Warm hugs,
EA

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3 posted 2003-02-20 11:38 AM




Me. too. I think we all feel that way.
Hugs and love, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-02-20 11:42 AM


Good morning, Pat! It's nice to have feedback where someone else can identify with your feelings! Thank you!

May you flow with ease down the river of life!

Warm hugs,
Linda

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5 posted 2003-02-20 12:32 PM


sigh
suthern
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6 posted 2003-02-20 12:52 PM


Take me with you!!! *S* Puh-leeeeeezzz???
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7 posted 2003-02-20 01:22 PM


LOL I know exactly what you mean Linda!
Let's jump together!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2003-02-20 01:30 PM


passing shadows ~

...let's sigh together...

Warm hugs,
EA

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2003-02-20 01:33 PM


suthern ~

Hold onto to my wings and let's fly into the wild blue yonder!

May peace reign supreme in your world!
Linda

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2003-02-20 01:34 PM


Nancy ~

Hop on board! We'll ride the thermals--up, up and awaaaayyyyy!

Warm hugs,
Linda

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11 posted 2003-02-20 02:53 PM


I know what you mean, I want to get off too.
Sunshine
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12 posted 2003-02-20 03:06 PM



I'll join that ride,
if you let me off when you get off...

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2003-02-20 03:22 PM


Sue ~

Modern technology is such a mixed blessing, is it not?!?--and the pace of life seems to be increasing as though time really is collapsing. I'm one who likes it slow and easy altho' that is not how my life is! I really do miss the gentler times...

Warm hugs,
Linda

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2003-02-20 03:24 PM


Sunshine ~

Please do join me on that ride!--and when we get off on cloud 9, let us leisurely enjoy a heavenly brewed cup of tea and share our remembrances of the days of yore!

Warm hugs,
Linda

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15 posted 2003-02-20 04:08 PM


I won't stop!! Besides..if I stopped too soon...you may not get off.....okay, so you may not be talking about "getting off" that way...but you know how Toe's mind works....Really a good deep, well thought out write sweets.....
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16 posted 2003-02-20 04:11 PM


ROFL... Considering Toe's interpretation, my response gains whole new meaning! ROFLMAO!!!

(And here I thought I was playing the innocent act SO well! LOL)

Earth Angel
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17 posted 2003-02-20 04:40 PM


Toe ~

It seems like  you were the only one to  understand what I was really talking about! tehe...please continue, don't let me STOP you!

Waaarrrrmmmmm huuuggggs,
EA

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (02-22-2003 07:44 PM).]

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2003-02-20 04:42 PM


Suthern ~

I just reread your response again and I see what  you mean regarding Toe's naughty but nice reply! You and he are like two peas in a pod--correction, you are like two nuts in a shell! You both are so witty!

Warm hugs,
Linda

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19 posted 2003-02-22 10:27 PM


They sure are witty and like two nuts in a shell, aren't they ??HaHa!!
Another good one I've missed these last couple of days...
Well, back to the top with it, lady  

Hugs,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-22-2003 10:34 PM).]

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20 posted 2003-02-22 10:31 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Linda, this is so very sad but true, sweet friend, we never have the time to cherish the simple things of yesterday and everyone is claiming "they want to change and make the world a better place" when it is in fact becoming more complicated! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is powerful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
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21 posted 2003-02-22 10:35 PM


Ethel, seeing your name always makes me smile!--whether it be your poetry or your replies. It's comforting knowing that you are out there sailing the blue with your wit, charm, and caring ways!

Warm nighttime hugs,
Linda

Earth Angel
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22 posted 2003-02-22 10:39 PM


Noah, ah, yes. It seems there is a ocean of us who feel as though they are being inundated with information, technology and a fast pace of life. I do miss the simpler times but I also appreciate many of the modern advances.

Sleep tight! Don't let the bed bugs bite!
Warm nighttime hugs,
Linda

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