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A Sunday Morning
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A Sunday Morning |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“A SUNDAY MORNING’” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Have you ever touched toes lying in bed together, the windows wide open, and a cool breeze blowing, just cuddling and snuggling, holding each other tight and it was all happening, on a beautiful Sunday morning… Your eyes stared at him, and his eyes stared at you, no words needed to be whispered or spoken, because that warm tender embrace with each other, was loves song for two, with all adoration… Blankets pulled up to both chins, and bodies toasty, fingers are walking, talking, and senses are awakening feelings are deep inside, like you haven’t felt in awhile, for it was all starting to come together, on a Sunday morning… And under those warmish covers you both touched, with an embrace a little closer, and sighing together, it doesn’t matter if it’s six a.m., or whether it’s nine, for you and him are knowing, that this morning things are better… So when you lie on your bed late at night and go to sleep, and you awake early the next day, and both are still adjusting, just make sure that the soft breeze blowing is chilled, and you’re both cuddling and snuggling, on a Sunday morning… ~~~~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Bill, This is lovely. I am so glad you are submitting it for the book. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Oh my gosh, how could this get so far down without a comment!  It's time for a big special boost for you back to the top! Yay!  (big hugggssssssss) This is soooooooo gorgeous and sensual, sweet friend, this is so comforting and shines with such passion, this made me feel like taking a nap and dreaming of my dream girl yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very nice and cosy, makes me want to jump into bed again.  voting. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ah Bill this so warm and cozy.....enjoyed the read a lot Charisma |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A particularly wonderful and warming vision. ThisDiamond |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill....yes, I have, and I agree! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mmm, love Sunday morning cuddles Bill. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
I wish my sunday mornings were like that! All I have are my two cats sitting on my head when i wake up! Im glad you left this open for submissions! A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Bill, this is so lovely i liked it always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
One of my very favorite things to do!!! Got my "click" on this one Bill!! "Have you ever touched toes lying in bed together, the windows wide open, and a cool breeze blowing, just cuddling and snuggling, holding each other tight and it was all happening, on a beautiful Sunday morning…" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Bill, it does belong there....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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GavinKidd Junior Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 44NH |
I read this once and then had to again an hour later for I was still smiling. Thanks, Bill. I'll be thinking about this piece all day long. Very nice. Kidd |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooooooo...the smile you just brought to my face.......the warm feeling........the remembering........this is beautiful! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This would make a perfect ANY morning! LOL |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This is my absolute favorite of your poems--and that is saying a great deal! I didn't even breathe as I read this! To me, this is deliciously my ideal way of spending a weekend morning! Waaarrrrmmmm hugs! EA |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
bill, each new poem of yours gets better i think, the messages within them, the passion, and complete love. sigh...... this should go in as a reminder to the whole world to appreciate those 'moments' as they are precious, and reading your poem, it says exactly that. you're one of a kind dear sir, keep writing us more! lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Can't remeber if I voted for this... Excellent choice Bill ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
This is a cozy, cuddly kind of fun feeling, Bill. The only thing better would be to have it happen Monday through Saturday too. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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