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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-02-17 07:39 AM


Wheel of Time

The wheels of fortune spins in lime
Dissolving all that live in time.
Bleaching, reaching flesh and bone
It does away with all but tone.

Now tone rings out the universe
It sings in every stars disperse.
It is the constant hum and drum
Of everything that has a sum.

It is the noise of existence
The only one of ploys persistence
And if you listen close its send
You can hear beginning and end.

Now do not ask me what this means
I’d only answer you in dreams
I know naught, beginnings and end
And very little of the send

I only know the tone is there
But even this I would not swear.


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1 posted 2003-02-17 07:52 AM


yes..I think the tone is there as well..

nice read this morning Sy.. I enjoyed

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-02-17 08:28 AM


Capt,
Thank you for the time and read.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-02-17 08:47 AM


Much enjoyed the morning read Sy!
Tea's ready...
~Morning hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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4 posted 2003-02-17 08:58 AM


Now do not ask me what this means
I'd only answer you in dreams
I know naught, beginnings and end
And very little of the send

======================================


Once again, your gifted pen ... speaks with humilty,
but you see, and forgive me ... I must mothily disagree.
You in true ... do hold the secret of the send ...
you wrote the book of beginings and the poetic bend of ends.

So now I smile at your attemp to sway in versed fiction,
grateful to begin each day with your cadenced diction.  



*ww*

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-02-17 08:59 AM


Nancy,
Thank you dear, be right there.

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-02-17 09:01 AM


JM,
And you are my Tinkerbell forever more.
WWRS

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2003-02-17 10:39 AM


Seymour - another enjoyed write from you...

BC

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8 posted 2003-02-17 10:43 AM




Ah, I love this. "It is the noise of existence". And so it is!

Enjoyed greatly, this makes me smile.

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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9 posted 2003-02-17 11:19 AM



Now you have my brain spinning...
because your wheel has many spokes,
and I held on to each one...

Thank you Sy...
for always leaving us a gift
in the morning...

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10 posted 2003-02-17 11:21 AM


Thank you, dear Seymour, for a spin
on your wheel of time....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-02-17 11:30 AM


Bill  
Thank you Bill I appreciate the reply.

Pat,
A smile is surely worth while.

Lady In White
You are a delight.

garysgirl
I'm glad you enjoyed the ride.

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12 posted 2003-02-17 12:09 PM


Good morning, Mr. T.!

It pleases me to no "end" that this day, as do others, is "beginning" with you!

Have a great one!
EA


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13 posted 2003-02-17 01:55 PM




(smiles) Oh Seymour, I just love how your world seems to rotate, sweet friend, your multi-faceted visions always seem to fascinate me, this is wonderful, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2003-02-17 02:44 PM


Earth Angel
It's nice to have an angel in your corner.


Noah,
Thanks for the sweet meat.

Toerag
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15 posted 2003-02-17 03:16 PM


Sy..this is really well done my friend...
D.Lester Young
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16 posted 2003-02-17 04:02 PM


Very nicely wriiten in a lot a thought. I really liked the line "You can hear beginning and end".
Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2003-02-17 05:18 PM


D.Lester  
Thank you for the read and nice comment.

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