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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it is like god made them for us our woods on sunday afternoons after the others have gone when you say the old chevy is your chariot and I am your mark anthony and you have your cleo gown on made of cotton so shear it lets me read you when you think those things and have reactions or when you stand there with pickup door open waiting for me to look where your thighs whisper as you do your climb out dance you say you like being unladylike then when my eyes are on you and you like the bumps in the road that make you crash into me hard sometimes so you have to grab my leg up there high to keep your balance you painted your toes again with harlot color paint just to put them out the window and watch me look there and there too when the wind moves your hem I feel your eyes looking up at me from your lap pillow and turn down that road to the other side of the trees where we meet god for hours and walk in his heaven where we are alone with love and can speak our special language where you leave your cleo gown hanging on the side mirror and we walk our love there in dark shadows of our woods ©Dark |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I'm just off to bed, and may I tell you that I'm glad this is my last read for the night - I simply love this..it has the flow I search for in poetry... 'and turn down that road to the other side of the trees where we meet god for hours and walk in his heaven where we are alone with love and can speak our special language where you leave your cleo gown hanging on the side mirror and we walk our love there' stunning really.  K[This message has been edited by Severn (03-06-2002 05:56 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
agreed...very nice flow and the images well presented for the reader to 'tag" along on your trip...I enjoyed!!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Severn, humble thanks, it is a wonderful place..thanks for coming along Cpat, the dust of the road is even friendly as it dances and lands without touching the scent of the wildflowers thanks for the read |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
D, I can't seem to get enough of your words.....the way you write is amazing  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words always amaze me and have me envisioning the most gorgeous visions! (big hugggsssss) May you and your love forever share a lifetime of happiness in God's country, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
SEA..thank you for always reading and wanting more..I appreciate you and your eyes |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
My eyes dance along your words Dark. Never wanting that dance to end.... Beautiful read this morning. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
I love the flow and use of imagery here.Your words keep me wanting more.  Peaches |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Friend Noah, thank you my friend Nancy, so pleased to have your eyes touch places with me Peaches, thank you so much for your visits |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Reading you takes me to another place. Much enjoyed the ride! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
martie, pleased that you went along you are always welcome to my visions |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
it is like god made them for us our woods on sunday afternoons after the others have gone when you say the old chevy is your chariot and I am your mark anthony and you have your cleo gown on I believe he did. You are so there. In memory places taking pictures and creating new thoughts with them. A spiritual/sensual barefooted place...I adore this!! Sincerely, Regina |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
go there with me if you dare wear your smiles thank you regina |
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