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beside your caution
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beside your caution |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you brought extra caution said it was cold lonely and you were not going to do it again I took your coat and your sweater you said that was enough for now and did I like your bra was the lace the right color to match my hands when under unhooking you were too shy to sit across from me where my eyes could touch so you wore me as your shoulder skin |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) Awwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful and lightly sensual, sweet friend, you always write such wonderful declarations of passion in your words! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
humble thanks my friend noah...I appreciate you much |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"you brought extra caution said it was cold lonely and you were not going to do it again" excellent write....I relate to this part..... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you for the read and for relating I appreciate your eyes |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
And I appreciate your gifts of word...very, very enjoyable... wrap your fingers around your pen again, please...and leave your thoughts in blue... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
my words write without my hand the pen is my soul the ink my blood of tears thanks lady |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
bravo! Nicely woven images and a tightly told story... good stuff!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
humble thanks my friend |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
wrapped in comfort touch held at arm's length open doors offer opportunity to come in from the cold Interesting imagery, DS. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
the images are there indigo just need a model to help me put them on eye screens thank you for your interesting (wink) |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
caution, peeled away in sensory, sensual layers like an onion..... been a while since i tipped my hat to the Dark Stranger ~tip~ TSR (always cool, always fresh 'mages dude!) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
you were too shy to sit across from me where my eyes could touch so you wore me as your shoulder skin ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Yes...enjoyed this for sure. hugs. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend shadow, thank you amigo, glad to see your touch Nancy, thank you for reading and smiling |
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