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MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

0 posted 2002-03-05 01:57 PM






~*~ Lady in Yellow ~*~

Lady in Yellow
Never think her mind is too shallow
To see
The dangers of your sea

Hers is a color so bright
The color of the sun
In its glory day

The color
Of the hearts of many a flower

And with that color
Forever shining anew
She knows
How dangerous it is
To give herself totally
To you

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Thank you

*Just another simple attempt with the ladies..

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1 posted 2002-03-05 02:17 PM


This poem had alot of warm feeling to it.ENJOYED IT!

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Sven
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2 posted 2002-03-05 02:18 PM


I would say my friend. . . that there is nothing simple about your attempts. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

MyEnchanted_Melody
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3 posted 2002-03-05 03:01 PM





~North Carolina Girl

I'm glad you enjoyed it..

Thank you
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~Sven

My dear friend...
Your words always make me happy and grateful for the encouraging support you give..

Thank you dearly...

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4 posted 2002-03-05 03:12 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always sunshine to us all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this poem brightens with so many smiles! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-03-05 03:14 PM


An interesting series... leaving me to wonder how indeed one is painted one color or the other...

I enjoyed!

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
6 posted 2002-03-05 03:39 PM




~Noah

Your presence & words shines always shine sweetly and delight me...

Thank you sweet friend
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~Ron..

We can be all the colors of the rainbow...can't we?

Thank you dearly for reading it.

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