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rosepetals25

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0 posted 2002-03-04 09:41 AM

Love Me

Hold me in your arms
Wrap me in your forever
And I’ll do the same

Take me with your kiss
Claim my soul as lovers do
And I will do the same

Hold my heart softly
Show me your sweet tenderness
And I will do the same

Love me forever
Need me for eternity
And I’ll do the same.

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home
[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (03-04-2002 12:18 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-04 10:14 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo romantic, sweet friend, I am so happy to feel you're in love and I hope that you and Dave will share a lifetime of happiness with each other, this I dream for you both from the bottom of my heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend...ooohhhhhh...you have to show me how to put pictures up with poems! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2002-03-04 10:15 AM

Hold my heart softly"

Isnt that the most amazing feeling....you have said this with beauty and grace....lovely Tara~

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

rosepetals25

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3 posted 2002-03-04 10:59 AM

Noah - lol.. I will tell you then I promise

Thank you for reading.

Lauren - Yep, it's the best feeling in the world.

Thanks for stopping by, I'm glad you liked

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-03-04 11:39 AM

"Love me forever.
Need me for eternity
and I'll do the same."
James

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2002-03-04 12:28 PM

Take me with your kiss
Claim my soul as lovers do
And I will do the same
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Tara...love looks good on you no matter how many syllables

devotion and anticipation of things to come make for poetry of the heart.
wonderful to see you so happy.

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

6 posted 2002-03-04 01:51 PM

This is lovely, Tara. I'm sure Dave will love it.

*hugs*

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2002-03-04 02:04 PM

Anybody that could refuse you after this knows nothing...lovely write, my friend.

jwesley

rosepetals25

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8 posted 2002-03-04 05:36 PM

James - Thank you for reading

Janet - Thank you

I still can't believe how lucky I've been.

August - Thank you

jwesley - It's good to see your name

Thanks for stopping in.

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2002-03-04 07:30 PM

loved it

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

10 posted 2002-03-04 08:22 PM

I really enjoyed it, love is contageous.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

11 posted 2002-03-04 09:21 PM

ooooh, you are always soooo good at these. Love it!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

rosepetals25

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12 posted 2002-03-04 10:06 PM

vandana -

I'm glad.

walker - Thank you

Chris - Awww thank you. I love this form of poetry

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

13 posted 2002-03-04 11:58 PM

as usual, my dear, you take my breath away.
-Dave

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

14 posted 2002-03-05 01:08 AM

Yes Tara, alot of mind reading going on. Beautiful, heartfelt poem!

rosepetals25

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15 posted 2002-03-05 01:12 AM

Dave - I love you

Duncan - You know what they say about great minds

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

16 posted 2002-03-05 08:59 AM

you wear love water
I see your woman skin
shimmer in tremble dance

lovely work ms

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

17 posted 2002-03-05 11:25 AM

Such a lovely piece....full of love..

Thank you
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