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Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

0 posted 2002-03-02 11:08 PM

Don't cry for me for I'm still here.
So wipe away that saddened tear.
Just look around and you will see
My spirit guiding ever free.

As dawn arrives to start anew,
I am the drops of morning dew.
As fresh spring flowers start to bloom,
I am the fragance in the room.

As you lay by the brook to dream,
I am the bubbles in the stream.
After the storm that passes by,
I am the rainbow in the sky.

When day turns into velvet night,
I am that diamond shining bright.
When sleep arrives and dreams are made,
I am the midnight serenade.

So please don't shed a tear for me.
I'm still out there for you to see.
Return that twinkle to your eyes,
I'm reflections in the seas and skies.

Eloise

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

1 posted 2002-03-02 11:19 PM

Eloise - Very good. Solid rhyme and rhythm all the way through. It is almost as if you wrote this from the great beyond.

Dave

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-03-02 11:25 PM

Eloise...this could be a loved one..who has
passed away...pointing out where they remain.

Many possibilities....excellent write...

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2002-03-02 11:27 PM

You paint a lovely picture of the great world of the west...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-03-02 11:31 PM

(smiles) Oohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always so soothing and wonderful to read! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eloise, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

5 posted 2002-03-02 11:55 PM

I love this...though sad, it's also quite beautiful.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2002-03-03 08:47 AM

exactly! that's what it is all about. enjoyed this much.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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