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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-03-01 07:12 PM


Mmmmmmmmm
By: Noah Eaton
3/1/02

Mermaids mutter melodies merrily
Mercury merges meticulously, moping Medusa
Moonflowers muster Midas moonbeams
Melodramatic metaphors metamorphosize, morphing mellifluously
Medicine men mute melancholy, memorizing melisma
Mendacious miscarriaged mirages mirrored, miracles mankind's miserere
Mercy moats morose mothernaked magnanimous meadow mouse martyrs
Mordent metronomic mimics mantel Madonna
Morpheus mothers moribund mind movies
Mizzling masseuse meadowsweet moments
Making mulberry maple mosaic mirthful memories
Mountain mantras montage mozzarella mambos
Merlin's matchbox maximizes mysterious miraculous magic
Midnight minestrone marauds my mimosa Muse
Mingled messaline, maidenhair morning murmurs
Methinks milady muffles me
Moonstruck, meeting merrily
Marrying my merry matrimonious mistletoe Muse
Mmmmmmmmmmm...

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-01-2002 07:13 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-01 09:01 PM


"Merlin's matchbox maximizes mysterious miraculous magic"

Noah, how you came up this this many m words
dang! my head hurts now....LOL very well done

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2 posted 2002-03-01 09:37 PM


Midnight minestrone marauds my mimosa Muse...

Wow Noah, does that hurt?
Just kiddin! I liked your "memorable M-scapades!" You really put your heart, soul and good soup into it ThisDiamond

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3 posted 2002-03-01 10:08 PM


Mystical Magical Message!!
~Many miles of smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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4 posted 2002-03-01 10:10 PM


LOL
(shaking head)
I think I'll sleep tonight with some of your
"mulberry maple mosaic mirthful memories"



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5 posted 2002-03-01 11:23 PM


Wow Noah! You really did this good. But then, I knew you could do it. I got the hard letter, LOL. Very, very good, Noah.
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6 posted 2002-03-02 05:28 AM


I was just wondering Noah, while this is very clever and all, if it actually meant anything?

I was just trying to understand what this:

'Mountain mantras montage mozzarella mambos' and other lines might mean? Or did it have personal meaning for you as a whole?

Thanks for the enlightenment!

K



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7 posted 2002-03-02 07:14 PM


masterful. . .

I'm impressed Noah. . . very impressed. . . and yes, I did find much meaning in these words. . . well done. . .

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8 posted 2002-03-02 07:40 PM


More! More! More! maybe Mister? Well done Noah..hugs, Chris

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9 posted 2002-03-02 08:46 PM


Wow, that was fun. And not easy, I'm thinking.
Now I missed this challenge by Sven, someone should tell me what to do.
Sandra

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10 posted 2002-03-02 08:56 PM


Noah Hi there this is way cool, I haven’t taken up any challenges yet and there’s no way I’ll be doing this one. Mum does alliteration I don’t. This is wonderful you’ve done well here Noah very well


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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