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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2002-02-27 05:45 PM

You drank too much again
and when I put you to bed
I paused while undressing you
noticing the soft touch of light
on naked skin, reminded me of how we had changed.
You groaned,
so I continued,
letting you snore
while I sat cross-legged on the bed
admiring the you that used to be

[This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (02-27-2002 05:46 PM).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-02-27 05:48 PM

hmmmm...not sure if I understand this one, Cap...(cracking myself up today!) heh heh.

But theriously, you know I love this one...it's both sad and beautiful (and methinks yer a bit naughty yerself!)

sigh...I know, I gotta go...

Thanks!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2002-02-27 05:50 PM

Well done, you rascal, you

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2002-02-27 05:52 PM

*sigh* heartfelt and heartbreaking....How very sad when there is only the past to remember with joy....**big big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-27 05:52 PM

(sigh) Soooooo beautifully sentimental, sweet friend, a tinge of sadness fills these words! (sigh) I hope now your tears have been cleansed away and now you always feel a light of bliss every time you look into her eyes! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

5 posted 2002-02-27 05:55 PM

Very Good Job!!!!

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

6 posted 2002-02-27 06:52 PM

One of the worst aspects of compulsive behavior is withdrawal into the isolation of self.It hurts looking into that glass cage knowing it forever blocks the touch.Remember the cage works both ways.

paladin

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2002-02-27 07:10 PM

reminded me of how we had changed.
=================================
admiring the you that used to be
=================================

those lines and the title could fill volumes of diaries with lifetimes of lost moments and regret.
aching write Capt.

"Never made it as a wise man
couldn't cut it as a poor man stealin
Tired of livin like a blind man
sick of sight without a sense of feelin"

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2002-02-27 07:27 PM

The happy part of this is that you are still looking, and remembering good things.
Sandra

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2002-02-27 11:33 PM

Capt

I understand this so well...broke my heart but gave me a touch of understanding. Hugs!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

10 posted 2002-02-27 11:46 PM

sometimes change can be
sad..and memories even make them sadder..vivid images here

~Victoria~

"Mistakes are the portals of discovery."
-- James Joyce

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